Haiku – Sunrise Glances

Posted on December 15, 2013 by A Renfro

Kiss me with dew drops

The morning said to the night

Then leave me to shine

†

19 thoughts on “Haiku – Sunrise Glances”

readinpleasure says:

December 16, 2013 at 8:17 am

Ah, beautiful!
1. atothewr says:
  
  December 16, 2013 at 7:34 pm
  
  Thank you.
oneofaclass says:

December 16, 2013 at 12:45 pm

Very nice – I like the idea of morning speaking to night.
1. atothewr says:
  
  December 16, 2013 at 7:34 pm
  
  Thanks.
Sumana Roy says:

December 16, 2013 at 1:55 pm

beautifully written…
1. atothewr says:
  
  December 16, 2013 at 7:35 pm
  
  Thank you.
Sanjida Shaheed says:

December 16, 2013 at 2:07 pm

This makes me empty and hopeful at the same time. There is the suggestion of both a farewell and a new beginning.
1. atothewr says:
  
  December 16, 2013 at 7:35 pm
  
  Interesting way to look at it. It really is a start and a finish all in one. Thanks for the comment.
  1. Sanjida Shaheed says:
    
    December 16, 2013 at 8:54 pm
    
    You are welcome!
Gillena Cox says:

December 16, 2013 at 2:17 pm

nice!!!

much love…
1. atothewr says:
  
  December 20, 2013 at 1:35 pm
  
  Thanks.
CuriositytotheMax says:

December 17, 2013 at 12:16 am

One of my very favorite “Dew” Haiku! Perfect and charming.
1. atothewr says:
  
  December 17, 2013 at 1:52 pm
  
  Thank you so much.
poetrypea says:

December 17, 2013 at 12:32 pm

What a great idea
1. atothewr says:
  
  December 17, 2013 at 1:52 pm
  
  Thanks for the comment.
magicalmysticalteacher says:

December 17, 2013 at 12:42 pm

Shining!

Desert Dew
1. atothewr says:
  
  December 17, 2013 at 1:53 pm
  
  Thanks.
Alice Keys says:

December 18, 2013 at 4:07 pm

Fabulous.
1. atothewr says:
  
  December 19, 2013 at 9:32 am
  
  Thank you.

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