Radiant sunset
Fall day moves into the night
Kissed by liquid gold
Tag: Sunset
Haiku – Sky Fire 9
Red, blue, light-gray sky
Sunset burning into night
Daylight takes a break
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The rest can be found here: http://wp.me/p2kmxm-2Zh
Haiku – Arctic Sunset
Thick frozen shadows
Blackness of night descending
Light in death’s embrace
Haiku – Sky Fire 7
A pewter grey sky
Mixed with mirror shards of red
Clouds filled with fire
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More from this series:
Haiku – Gold
Cool early autumn
Gold amber light permeates
The day fades to black
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Inspired by the theme at
Haiku – Sandy Feet
Edge of the shoreline
Toes touching the water’s warmth
As the red sun sets
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Inspired by the theme at
Haiku – Rosy
Soft rosy pink clouds
Blushing as the day fades out
In a bright red light
Haiku – Sky Fire 6 (Re-Write)
Sunlight cascading,
fading, into nighttime’s grasp
Evening sky bleeds
After publishing this earlier today I realized two things, the last line had six syllables in it (evening is three not two) and I also wasn’t a big fan of the way I closed the original – Evening sky turns red.
I went ahead and made the changes and then published it the way I think it should have gone out, originally. Us poets, so neurotic, we have to get it right.
Thank you for reading. You are now free to move about the blog.
Here is the original Part 6: http://awrenfro.com/2013/02/25/haiku-sky-fire-6/
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